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re_alisma
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gotta be some show-off-y
my love
is like
a red, red rose
kind of poet.
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Doar
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this is cool. I have my own anti....
damn....I wonder what this person is and does.....and other things...
wow....my own personal anti.....I can't get over this....
good luck anti....
hope to meet you soon...
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I sincerely hope he/she is a better poet than me. I will read/scan every post my anti-doar deigns to back breathe.
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I'm so looking forward to this. My narcissis will be curious.
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all i hear him saying, over and over again, is:
"my love
is like
a red, red rose."
look out, for i believe he might copy-paste it to every poem you write. he seems to think he's got this romance thing in his back pocket.... really, though, he's pretty much really, really boring. really romantic and really boring.
give me some good old fashioned doar-y skepticism any day, yep.
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damn...that was good. please keep doing what you are doing.
have I said the roses thing too much?
well I can't help it....and I don't believe I will apologize for it.
but damn, thanks for bringing it to my attention.
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ouch, and the boring thing, that did hurt.
can't do much about that trait.
it happens, wish I could have written better to keep you enthralled.
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better luck next time.
and thanks.
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well, you misunderstood and took anti-doar for doar. oh, well.
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aunty christ
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Thou shalt not take my name in vain.
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yer satanic nephew
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i'd never dream of doing such a thing
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oh you....little hell breather...you'll always be a part of me....
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Doar
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I really do hope that this slight episode,
does not tarnish the conversation that might be...
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oh re_alisma,
never mistake mu corner of my soul.
I'ved coloured between the lines and
still haven't drawn.....
I still have no god.....
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i was thinking in terms of math or particle physics or something, not so much religion. i figured, if Death of a Rose is going to dark-chocolate it up, then he needs a bland counterpoint to keep things in perspective.
i can still hear the anti_doar droning, "my love is like a red red rose...." the anti_doar imagines nothing and accepts only the certain or very familiar.... and so he doesn't much like this website... poor anti-doar!
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That was semi beautiful.
thank you anti_doar.
I know what you are saying,
and I know what my rhetorical
has returned.
Just know that I have had some fun and
I hope you have had the same.
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lmao...
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Doar
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oh_crap
I have just been hit the brain pan...
Your identity is known to me now..
A hidden painting that I have gazed upon.
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I have known you from without,
and I am at loss from within.
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I still imagine the rose,
it droops in death.
But it's smell and lifting
still bring me to a happier place.
The short hours I have had with that smell, it tells me that I will survive and flourish.
This is what the rose has taught me.
And when the last petal has fallen,
so shall i....
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I still imagine the rose,
it droops in death.
But it's smell and lifting
still bring me to a happier place.
The short hours I have had with that smell, it tells me that I will survive and flourish.
This is what the rose has taught me.
And when the last petal has fallen,
so shall i....
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I understand know,
having read your physics
and the loose control you
provide.
It was while i honoured your published views, that I broke down and stared.
And it brought me to this point,
offered me a choice,
to tell me, that I'm breaking out.
It has told me what you told.
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