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amillio
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the sun sets a little more each day and i'm starting to wonder wether or not it really is worth all that while. things are getting more slippery and i can't seem to eat ice cream with chopsticks the way that i'd like to think i could (or is it should). one hardly can tell, two hardly can yell, while the third is always left wondering. with no prayer like desire,and amnesia in her kiss it seems no wonder a man can wander and find a place like this. i don't think i ever caught me when i tried once more and fell, like a moth mistakes a lightbulb for the moon and goes to hell
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i love you, I accept you, You are wonderful.
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a thimble in time
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I gather my thoughts
She gathers her tents
I wander my room
She wanders the world
I lose my way on the road
She gets lost inside her head
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awhitewalrus
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stopped being friends in 7th grade.
that seemed to be the general trend as far as my friends went.
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I'm changing the second to last line to: "I lose my mind on the road."
It's a bit cliche, but it sounds better.
Also, the last line alludes to a comment made by William Carlos Williams in his introduction to Ginsberg's "Kaddish".
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Piso Mojado
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you are fabulous, you know that?
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a thimble in time
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Thanks, I needed that.
TTU in NY
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