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epitome of incomprehensibility It's 11:59 in Times Square

(I've never been there)

and everything's running like nanotechnology

(what does that even mean?)

the numbers streaming down the screen like rain

(because you watched The Matrix in high school, and also think that comparing things to rain is original)
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e_o_i Just discovered - if you go to "nanotechnology" I made a sort-of song inspired by that poem when I was 17.

It's all pretty silly, but I still kind of like this part:

We got the car reloaded
And then the world exploded
But that's okay 'cause so did
Canada

...The line "And then the world exploded" is from a kid in my class who sabotaged (creatively!) a creative writing game by saying this sentence all the time.
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unhinged like my blathes from twenty years ago


cringe
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