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| in a silent way |
i am tempted now to mislead you somehow make you think i mean to hurt you when i only want your lower back to curve the way it does a long as my eyes will let me drink from your reservoir |
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| in a typo way | a long. as long. longer than. long as. | 130121 |
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| endless desire | like this, in a silent way. like this a lot. | 130122 |
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| in a silent way | and here i thought the typo kind of marred it (that stuff drives me batty when i don't catch it until it's too late). thank you muchly. if you like this, you might like the "letters to no one" blathe over on red too...similar kind of thing, but a little more ambitious. | 130122 |
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| endless desire |
I thought the typo lost something but your response added something so it all came out even. I'll have to venture to the red. I never do that. |
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