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i have nothing to do, but i have alot of things that i could say.... hmmm
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i like to write poetry!
Nothing hurts more than a broken heart
A pain that stings and doesn’t part
A broken heart may never ever heal
When you know that the love was real
When this happens life gets really sad
You never thought you would feel this bad
When you’re all alone you just sit and cry
You think and think and wonder why
You wish things could have worked out
You’re hurt so bad you could just shout
You feel there is nothing to ease the pains
Even through this heartache the love remains
You want to be strong and hide your tears
You think about all your lost dreams and fears
You think about the happiness you once had
Knowing its gone makes you really sad
Nothing hurts more than a broken heart
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Best Friends
Someone to be with,
Someone to care,
And to comb your hair,
Someone to hang with,
And to have sleepover fun,
To tell secrets to,
Someone who understands what to do
When you are blue,
Someone to hear your problems,
And help to solve them,
A best Friend is some one who loves you,
And understands you.
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Drifting
You walk alone,
You talk to yourself
You have so many friends,
So far away
You stay in places,
Knowing no one,
Why do you do that?
Why do you care?
All of them have killed you,
All of them are the enime
I do not fight for if I was to,
I would be just as bad as them,
Drifting, forever,
Caught in a storm,
Never to return,
Drifting,
Into perfect happiness.
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LOVE
Love is pain,
Love is something no one can know
Love is what you feel when you think about them all the time,
Love is a flower in a garden of thorns,
Love is everything,
Love is nothing,
Love is how you feel,
When you never want to miss them,
You never want them to go away,
Love is love,
No matter what form,
Man to man,
Woman to woman,
Woman to man,
They are all the same,
Yet different,
Love, you can’t define it, you can’t hold on to it,
You must let it go, hurt your self and what do you get?
Love and a broken heart..
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) For all we know We may never meet again Before we go Make this moment live again We won't say goodbye Until the last minute I'll hold out my hand And my heart will be in it For all we know This might only be a dream We come and we go Like the ripples, like the ripples in the stream So baby, love me, love me tonight Tomorrow was made for some Oh, but tomorrow But tomorrow may never, never come For all we know Yes, tomorrow may never, never come For all we know
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MnGirl
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i hope you like my poems, i wrote them..
they may be kind of stupid, oh well!
:) :)
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...but smooch with you.
(well, not you M-whatever... somoene else)
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MnGirl
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what?
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and two diagnostic tests this week so i get to read 800 pages of music history in three days....yipee.
much coffee and many cigarettes will be consumed by all...well at least me anyways. i just had to get the hell out of my apartment today though.
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sweetheart of the song tra bong
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nowhere to go-ooo
I wanna be sedated...
repeat until unbored
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if you use numbers in the place of words no wonder you have nothing to do. It seems that you are intelectually incapable of doing anything other than converse with yourself on this web site.
shame on you.
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by the way; your poetry is crap and your spelling is atrocious.
F = Crap effort. Try again only when you've memorised www.dictionary.com.
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dB, i think that just because you can't do anything well your self, and choose to diss others to make your self feel better that you need to go and get a life. at least i try to express myself in a way that i feel most safe.
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unhinged
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wow....
db shame on YOU
blather_is_blather
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MnGirl maybe I could give you one of my disposable lime green rain parka, it's really good at catching all the spatter.
Just wanted to chime in and encourage you to keep refining you're own poetic voice - or maybe I'm being presumptuous and this is your refined poetic voice, if that's the case then - just let those embers fall to the ground and scatter - I'm still trying to find mine and hey everyones a critic right? Take it with a grain of salt i guess - out of the heart the mouth speaks - 'nuff said -
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What is this "Everyone's a critic" business? The phrase seems to have a negative connotation? Especially in this day in age is it not good to critically analyze everything? Critical Thinking they say! They're force feeding this crap in all the schools today? What does it really mean?
Well... primarily it means you should not fail to THINK about anything and everything in the world, to not be a zombie or a mindless automaton.
However... it does not mean anyone can and should babble useless insults. Where does it say that one should babble anything at all? Is it not possible to criticize without saying a thing...
Good, great... critique everything! In your head! Then for christ sake filter that and if you must spit something out, spit out something constructive.
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oldephebe
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wow that was almost as incomprehensible as my overtly solipsistic, self-indulgent word-sprawls of circuitousness
blech
anyway yeah we will argue and analyze adinfinitum..just go check out
_you have got to be kidding me..that ones a real opinion fest, just reams and reams of mastabatory conjecture..and I gotta say
(please brake for self deprecatory appraisal)
my droppings probably emit some of the strongest boquets on that page..meaning of course that we're all strapped in to our subjective states of consciousness..so pay no mind to whatever I write if you've got no use for it..blech
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alice
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does it hurt to collect our collective consciousnesses?
it does
but there is the impulse and that means something to do
but anyway... freezer acknowledgement: it's like a cup of nuts
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