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karl the weed
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rage
it consumes me, like a wildfire it spreads.
No good can come from it, only destruction.
I delude myself into thinking i control it, but as soon as i look away, I betray myself and the Rage comes again.
calmness is an illusion, cast out to others, masking the storm of fury inside of me.
And as the world falls to darkness, i lie still seething, until at last i fall unconcious, and then lonely dreams haunt me through the night.
I walk through a crowd, on the line between control and rampaging madness, the people oblivious.
and rarely th Rage subsides, leaving depression, the shadow of Rage. some nights i lie and wonder what it is like to be dead...
The Rage fuels me, yet simultaneously it burns me.
Like a disease it spreads through a family and tears it apart.
i was pretty pissed when i wrote this. i just thought about all the things that make me SO ANGRY and decided i should write something about it...
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endless desire
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i applaud you for your excellent poem. you were wrong, you can write poetry. and damn good poetry at that.
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karl the weed
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thank you
i guess i just needed to find a subject that i felt strongly on.
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endless desire
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passion.
it drives us all.
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030616
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ferret
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that was NICE
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030616
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trixie
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freakin awesome
i salute you
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030616
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karl the weed
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thank you... im touched...
i plan to make a second attempt soon.
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zspookster
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poetry??? hahahaha WAHHHH poor widdle 8th grader can't get SlutJen to go out with him huh? poor karl!!!
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Strideo
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weedelicious! i like it!
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