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poem_without_verbs
z can you? 040517
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smurfus rex Beauty before me,
Beauty behind me,
Beauty all around me,
One perfect, peaceful day.



did I pass?
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emmi this sentence no verb. 040518
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Deomis aching heartbeats
longing thoughts
of old memories
raindrops on my cheek
the moon softly lit
stars in my eyes
all dim in this mind
just for you
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z if softly is and adverb then lit is a verb 040518
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z i meant: if softly is an adverb then lit is a verb (albeit functioning as an adjective in the poetic sense) 040518