|
| |
the_wrong_thing
|
|
|
endless desire
|
there once was a human
who did the wrong thing
and the wrong thing got out of hand,
but she knew she was human
and did these wrong things
so she let herself do them again.
as time passed
and seasons changed,
it seems this poor human began a naughty trend
of breaking these rules,
disturbing her peace
and not knowing when wrong things should end.
as each deed plagued her life,
and each mistake left a stain
it seems she couldn't find a friend;
so she screamed and she shouted
she fell then she pouted
for all the wrong things would not mend.
im telling this story
not to confuse or to worry,
but because of a message i must send:
you see i am this girl
suffering from all these wrong things,
and i'd rather it not happen to anyone else again.
if you fall into wrong things
you lose all your sparkle
and the beautiful colours do blend...
until you have only a puddle
of brown muck, too much trouble.
oh how the tears never end.
|
040108
|
| |
... |
|
|
endless desire
|
i started rhyming and couldn't stop. but i thought this one was decent for dr. seuss. i suppose i think that someone needs to say so for me to know that it was an interesting poem, at the least. but i shouldn't have to. don't mind me. im just learning to be confident in myself without_tossing_my_hair.
|
040111
|
| |
... |
|
|
whitechocolatewalrus
|
i really like this, endless.
|
040117
|
| |
... |
|
|
Syrope
|
i love it...it's true - too many colors & too many brush strokes don't really fix mistakes...just make a brown splodge.
i can't even find my canvas anymore. :(
|
040118
|
| |
... |
|
|
person
|
the wrong thing is always more fun than the right thing. =P
|
040626
|
| |
... |
|
|
person
|
i like fun @_@
|
040626
|
| |
... |
|
|
nemo
|
billy_mckinney
the wrong thing.. i'd like to think so, that it was just some huge mistake, that you were playing around and slipped.. that you really meant it when you made me promise to visit you at work the next morning, when.. oh.. when you decided it was finally time. i want to know it was the wrong thing.
but im a believer in fate, in destiny somehow... things happen for a reason, or maybe they just work out sometimes to seem significant.. karma goes both ways. maybe it was really the_right_thing.
|
040626
|
| |
... |
|
|
melinda
|
No matter WHAT you will always have someone, just go to therapy.
|
040626
|
