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stork daddy
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driving, a classic rock song came on. the kind with the long bridge building to a climax, that they'd use in an action movie while a person who had just set a bomb drove calmly slow motion away from the scene as an inferno spread over the horizon. each little riff of the guitar was like the twitching leg of a spider climbing up the tile wall of a bathroom foreshadowing the eventual free fall legs flailing. he lit up a cigarette in time with the markers the structure of the song provided, each little action was the big explosion of the action movie he had just imagined. the first drag coinciding with the final blast. it was the same sigificance transposed to a smaller scale, and he was amused by it. he wondered if there was a way to do that elsewhere in life, to find in every little instance of existence rhythms and significances analagous to those known well to all people. if he could find significance in things in a way not common in most people. it seemed that if he could master that shortcut, he would control the external world rather than be so controlled by it. every moment of his life could be blockbuster, could be the sum of human fury and stupidity in a nutshell, a microcosm, a three minute song.
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The Consumer
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dude, just like in that volkswagon commercial in the french quarter, whoa.
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icy
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every now and then, i come back and alight upon something that sums me up... you are my three minute song. .
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stork daddy
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glad my playing isn't for naught.
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icy
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what if i was referring to the "whoa" from The Consumer? .
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oren
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Mr. D, you've got talent. I_love this.
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The Consumer
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glad my playing isn't for naughty
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stork daddy
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should be paying imo.
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icy
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oh, but i like naughty...
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god
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http://www.jazzweekly.com/reviews/TMooreHurricane.htm
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060105
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Thus have I read / heard.
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(Wavelength of "Man_talk" + Frequency of "Woman_nag" ) / 2
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icy
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don't worry, i have the stupidity part down real well. mind you, i didn't mean to imply that you were really worried... oh, well.
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Sunshines
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1, 2 skip a few 99... um... significance? would that it were so simple.
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epitome of incomprehensibility
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Good writing... I'm glad I came across this. It's poetic, surreal, a little funny. Eh. Sometimes I wish I could be one of those people who can write a story in only a paragraph. Shortcut Stories. A title for an anthology, why not?
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stork daddy
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i like it. note to self: keep writing before my head is empty of ideas!
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