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Dafremen
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I'll be making my first appearance at an open mike night here in town and I'm not sure which poem to open with. Your opinion would be appreciated( probably.)
The poems are here:
poems_for_you
Let me know whatcha think folx...thanks.
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Dafremen
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Well, the public has spoken and they apparently have supreme confidence in my ability to make the right choice. I've narrowed it down to
piece_of_work
_dusty
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i_freefall_me
Thanks again for the vote of confidence, you guys are the best.
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User24
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give us a chance!
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User24
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a_smile_to_sustain_me
i_am_small
be_alive
past_away
blather_improvisation
but my favorite is time_2_do_this
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oops.
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sorry if I'm too late..
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piece_of_work
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mike & the mechanics
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perhaps you should recite the_experiment_is_over and why_the_experiment_ended
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Dafremen
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Perhaps I should, mike. Perhaps the crowd at the claire de lune would see right past the obvious to the reality of that piece. Whadda ya think?
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eww... you're in my claire de lune!! who woulda thunk?
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tennis star of the 70s
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won't mike scream and bleed alot if you do that?
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member yall bleeded then
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is this, like, an open day?
open slather for gratuitous use of pointy objects?
like, a 20 minute free trial period?
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User24
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so, how'd it go, Daf?
Or has it not gone yet?
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Dafremen
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I went with
reflect_on_you (lemonade)
It was well received but had me wondering by the end of the night if I couldn't organize an open mike event that would let more people get mike time.
I tried checking this page twice on my $ell phone but the page kept timing out..
Thanks for the list though do0d..it made me go back and look at some pieces that I'd been neglecting. My webspace is gone..there is an emptiness where an old astrology book website used to be.
Life is such an interesting adventure..the way it rolls along swerves, dips and sways.
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I can especially hear the piece you chose dribble cadence off your tongue, daffy, it's got a good rollick to it. Some delicious phoenetic playthings, as well. Wish I coulda heard it. :)
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Dafremen
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Oh I'da flowed right through ya dear.
I try to keep the heart rates to just under a flutter
I do so love to perform.
(Bow)
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makeda
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dusty is very tight daf - keep it up
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Dafremen
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_dusty is one of my favorites. It was a dream set in Africa somewhere.
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Dafremen
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Thanks each and every one of you who took the time. I've thought about putting a poetry book together for years. (Actually did put one together, but never did anything with it.)
I must have been waiting on encouragement, because the positive comments I've been getting have given me just the push I needed.
The book is on the way. Thanks everyone.
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User24
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keep faith in yourself and your abilities, lack of positive regard is only equal to lack of exposure, it means nothing more than that.
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epitome of incomprehensibility
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Not for over a month. But I have to tutor most evenings. Also this is a boost for the poems here to be re-seen.
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