blather
amiss
. The suggestions helped not,
they were formed hastily,
formed for some other entity,
formed to fit all and therefore fit none

So I ran
from the suggestions,
from good-intentioned bad advisings,
I ran with my legs,
I raced with my thoughts,
but I felt so despairing
that I ran at the mouth
someone heard the nouns
yet missed the verbs.

There is no point in this
chitter-chat counsely-wounseling,
you do not get it,
I can't explain it,
truth is intangible and
lost in abstraction....
071105
...
somebody feeling amiss
is no feeling of bliss
081028
...
somebody good poem, btw dot 081028